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Not-A-Ling

FimFiction Link - Short ID: 304498/not-a-ling

Published: Dec '15Apr '16

Review in No. 39498628
1/10.
Cut it about 600 words in despite it being a 1.5k oneshot because Rarity was saying "Darling" every time she opened her mouth. It was like I was reading a M6 dialogue shitpost. It was maddening and killed whatever meta humor was being squeezed out.