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Noondark

FimFiction Link - Short ID: 538831/noondark

Published: Jul '23

Review in No. 40112011
7.5/10.

In an Equestria without alicorns, ravaged by the Everfree Forest, Sunburst travels to the site of a dragon who was recently blown out of the sky. It paints a very beautiful AU setting, using the Everfree in a way so rarely done, but goddamn am I getting sick of the blueball oneshot genre. Either write your 100k fic or don't post. "It makes your imagination go wild." is just another way of saying "It's a deadfic and I have write the rest of the story myself."